2020: Story 12: Walking with my Friend
This is story number 12 of 2020 - and as I type out the title, I'm reminded yet again that this year is drawing to an end. A year that threw the entire world into the chaos that we're still learning how to deal with.
The prompt for this month's story was "Hyped".
Young people often use this word to indicate the feeling of being ecstatic, pumped up, or extremely excited.
However, the dictionary definition of the word 'hype' is given as "To publicize or promote something intensively, in a way that attracts interest, often by exaggerating the benefits." This is the context in which I set this story.Happy reading, and waiting to hear your thoughts!
“Rama, I won’t be joining you on our morning walks from tomorrow,” said Shalini on the phone. Was that a note of diffidence that made her sound different today?
“What
happened, Shalini? Hope all is well with you?”
“Oh yes,
I’m good. It’s just that my daughter got me signed up at the Hot Reforma
Fitness Center that’s come up in town recently. Their slots are fast filling up
and I could only get an early morning batch and that’s around the time when we
usually take our walk. I agreed because even I have started feeling that our
so-called walking is of no use as real exercise. You know I haven’t been able
to lose even a single kilogram despite walking every single day for the past
three months.”
I bit my tongue and stopped myself just in time from commenting on her love of sweets and carbonated drinks that were probably to blame for the unchanged weight. After all, it is a free world and we all have the right to make decisions that seem correct to us.
The next
morning, as I walked alone on my regular walking route, our milkman passing by
asked, “You’re alone today, Didi? Is your walking friend unwell?”
“Oh no,
she’s good. She has joined the new fitness club that opened in town last week
and her session is at the same time as our walk. So...”
“Ah, ok, I
understand now. You take care, Didi. Walk carefully around the Jayprakash Road,
the water works department has dug up the road to lay some pipes.”
Thanking
him, I walked ahead.
As I passed
by the temple, I looked at the Lord’s idol from afar, bowing my head and
folding my hands in silent prayer, asking that He take care of things for me
and everyone in the world. The temple priest hailed me and came out holding
garlands that had adorned the Lord’s form the previous day. It was a practice
we had gotten into, and I would take the garland home as divine sacrament and
hang it at the entrance to my home to sanctify the premises.
“Here, Rama
ji, this is for you and ....” he looked around as if searching for someone.
“Shalini
won’t be coming from today. She has to go to the new fitness center for her
exercise,” I explained.
The priest
nodded silently and bid me goodbye.
I went on
towards the market and completed my purchases of vegetables and fruits for the
day. I remembered Shalini again as I did my shopping. She would haggle with the
sellers and get us items for lower price although I didn’t really like
depriving the poor villagers of a few rupees. When I tried to intervene, she
would say, “You don’t know these people, they expect customers to bargain and
so, they hike the prices.” The same Shalini justified buying clothes at the
label price at her favourite boutique when she went on shopping trips to the
city. She would gush over the material, the quality and the tailoring and justify
the high prices she paid.
“Didi
hasn’t come today?” asked the vegetable vendor. Was that a smile I saw on his
face anticipating a better profit margin from me unprotected by Shalini, I
wondered.
I explained
again about Shalini’s other engagement at the fitness club and finished my
purchase. Needless to say, I handed over the exact amount of money the vendor
asked me to pay. As I was turning away, he called out to me, and thrust a
sizeable bunch of coriander and curry leaves into my hands, saying, “It’s free,
you don’t have to pay.”
Pondering
over how unexpected human behaviour sometimes is, and at the human spirit where
generosity springs up in the most unexpected places, I made my way back home.
My life
continued as usual, and I occasionally talked with Shalini over the phone. She
was full of praise for her trainer at the fitness center who encouraged her to
try all the equipment and even gave her a diet plan to follow and monitored her
progress with great alertness.
“You know, Rama,
I lost half a kilogram in three weeks already,” she gushed.
I felt
happy for my friend.
After about
a week of this conversation, I got a call from Shalini’s daughter.
“Aunty,
will you come home to see Ma? She’s been asking for you.”
“What
happened to her? I hope she’s not ill or something?” I asked, and immediately
felt foolish. After all, how could Shalini with her new-found fitness fall
sick?
“Err...actually,
she’s got a muscle tear, and has been advised bed rest for two weeks. She’s
feeling bored with nothing to do, and says talking to you for a few hours will
help her feel better.”
I visited
Shalini the next day and was shocked to see how haggard she looked.
“Why,
you’ve lost so much weight, Shalini!” I couldn’t help exclaiming.
“Yes,
Rama,” she replied with a wan smile. Then she changed the topic to ask about my
son, and we spent the next few hours talking of all the things we had not
shared with each other ever since Shalini had stopped her morning walk with me.
We joked about the fact that my latest health check up showed that I was in
normal health, but there was no loss in my weight.
After I
returned home, I couldn’t help wondering if it would be a good idea to join the
fitness club like Shalini had done. I wasn’t getting any younger, and it was
probably time to start thinking about losing some of the weight that had
accumulated around my hips. I had seen so many elderly women struggle with knee
pain because of their weight.
A fortnight later, Shalini called.
“Rama, what
time do you set out for your morning walk these days?”
“Well,
actually, Shalini, I have ...”
She didn’t
allow me to complete my sentence.
“Rama, I
now realized the mistake I made in going to that fitness center. I didn’t
mention it to you the other day, but the doctor told me that the muscle tear
was due to over-exercising.”
“Oh!”
“At first,
I was obsessed with losing weight and wanted to do all the exercises that my
trainer taught me. Well, later, I began finding it a strain, and wanted to
reduce my routine, but by then, the trainer had decided that I should continue
the same set of exercises. He was using me as an example to encourage the other
ladies who came to the fitness center.”
“But that’s
not right. How can he force you to do something against your wishes?”
“Well,
that’s exactly what he tried to do. When I tried to talk about my problems to
the other exercising ladies no one even wanted to listen to me. So I quit. I’m
coming walking with you from tomorrow and that’s final, Rama.”
“Great! Be
here at 7.00 am as usual, Shalini.”
After
saying bye to Shalini, I made another phone call.
“Hot
Reforma Fitness Center? I’m Rama Gupta, and I’m calling to say I changed my
mind. I won’t be joining your classes.”
Lovely reading.
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